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 |  Subject: Mitch Albom  Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:41 pm | |
| I walked a mile with pleasure.
She chatted all the way.
But left me non-the-wiser.
For all she had to say.
I walked a mile with sorrow.
Not one word said she.
But all the lessons I learned.
When sorrow walked with me. It's a beautiful poem^_^ _________________  I'm here to play card games and kick some butt;
and I'm almost out of card games. |
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| | Subject: Re: Mitch Albom Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:17 am | |
| | webmaster wrote: | I walked a mile with pleasure.
She chatted all the way.
But left me non-the-wiser.
For all she had to say.
I walked a mile with sorrow.
Not one word said she.
But all the lessons I learned.
When sorrow walked with me.
It's a beautiful poem^_^ |
All poems are beautiful webby. But the ones that are way too long actually needs more focus and specially if someone is reciting it. You get lost on one thing you don't understand and the whole thing is meaningless. Take it from a guy who grew from the audience lol.
You poem has what you may call it, "A Strict Format". Meaning when you are writing that poetry, you are thinking you are writing a poem, and thinking of something to write about. Or the person did. It's the same format uses in "Roses are red..."
Now the trick to get the audience fame and the infinite applause, is to not look at them but look through them. It's the same look you look at your mother when you are disagreeing with something.
Also to not speak at them, but speak through them. Speak without fear, heck don't even remember you had a mike, nor a paper to recite a poem. Then you will go on gestures, and tones, and voila! Think of something you "feel'" or something that bothers you or anything related to you in particular matter, will then will you let your beauty shines out!_________________  |
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